Third Rough Cut and Feedback- New Footage

We decided to do a third rough cut before our final cut so that we could show our progress within the editing stage of the trailer. This also gave us more of a chance to look at the titles and the order of our footage within the trailer.

We have collected some feedback on our third rough cut so that any improvements can be made before completing our final cut. We have asked a variety of people and they have given us both positive and negative feedback.

Positive Feedback.

- The footage that you have really shows the characters personalities.
- You have a lot of footage so that audience have a lot to see.
- The trailer is a good length for a soap opera trailer.

Negative Feedback.
- There isn't any music on the trailer.
-You need to add footage where it says 'Lauren's footage'.
- Seems a bit muddled up, get confused what's happening without footage as well.
- Titles needed near the end of the trailer and font is boring at the end.

From this feedback we have found out that all of the footage that we have is really goo we just need to make sure that all of the content is in the right place and that certain parts are filled with extra footage. The people that we have asked to give us this feedback have said that it seems that we have a good plan for our trailer, we just need to add small parts to it which will make the trailer better overall.